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Simplified Technical English (STE) saves businesses time and money. Here are 4 compelling reasons why.

Simplified Technical English (STE) saves businesses time and money. Here are 4 compelling reasons why.

🚜 🛫 🚛 Simplified Technical English (STE) is a controlled language that aims to make technical documentation easier to understand for non-native English speakers and those with limited language proficiency. It is used widely in various industries such as aerospace, defense, and transportation.

Here are some reasons why investing in Simplified Technical English can be a good decision:

  1. Clear communication: STE provides a standard vocabulary and grammar, making technical documentation clear and concise, and reducing ambiguity. This can lead to more efficient communication and better understanding between technical writers, engineers, and end-users.
  2. Improved safety: In high-risk industries such as aerospace and defense, using STE can help reduce the risk of accidents caused by misunderstandings in technical documentation. By ensuring clear and unambiguous instructions, STE can contribute to improving safety and reducing risk.
  3. Cost-effective: Simplified Technical English can help reduce the cost of translation and localization of technical documents. By using a standardized language, companies can simplify the translation process and reduce the need for costly and time-consuming revisions.
  4. Compliance: STE is widely recognized as an industry standard for technical documentation in many sectors, and its use can help companies comply with industry regulations and standards. This can be particularly important for companies operating in highly regulated industries.

In summary, investing in Simplified Technical English can improve communication, increase safety, reduce costs, and support regulatory compliance. By adopting STE, companies can ensure that their technical documentation is clear, concise, and effective, which can ultimately contribute to their success and competitiveness in the global market.

📊 💻 Review the STE localization case study here.

 

🌐 Learn more about this international writing standard at our upcoming lectures and writing workshops in Q2 2023:

Europe Online STE Workshop | 2-day Training Course

April 13 – April 14

US, Canada | Certified Simplified Technical English workshops

April 17 – April 19

Asia Pacific: 2-day certified online STE workshop (APAC)

April 24 – April 25

Middle East & Africa (MEA) Simplified Technical English Writing Workshop | A language for all industries

May 8 – May 9

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Instructor-led Simplified Technical English (STE) training worldwide

Instructor-led Simplified Technical English (STE) training worldwide

Instructor-led training: We offer more than just a training service

  1. Are you a manager who has to constantly worry about the varying technical English proficiency levels of your staff?
  2. As an engineer, are you facing difficulties explaining your concepts to your technical writing team?
  3. In your role as a technical communicator, do you often struggle to convert complex ideas into brilliant content?

If you answered yes to any of the above, join us at the next instructor-led Simplified Technical English training workshop sessions online:

Write effective user manuals & instructions with Simplified Technical English

Length of training: 2 to 3 days

Course registration ends one week before training commences

Shufrans’ ILT STE workshop sessions are an effective means of delivering information, as they allow for real-time feedback, questions and answers, manipulation, and changeable delivery to suit the needs of learners in a conducive learning environment. ILT is also the most widely-used method for extended enterprise training, which trains customers and partners, with an 80% usage rate.

STE stands for Simplified Technical English. It offers native & non-native English speakers alike an efficient platform to improve your technical English language competency when writing for a global audience.

  1. For technical writers: simplified wording and grammar will improve readability and safety compliance of your documentation and product respectively.
  2. For engineers and programmers: Breeze through the writing of test cases, technical documents, and business emails in a highly standardised and regulated manner. STE opens up effective communication channels, hence avoiding potential miscommunication issues at work while improving the overall professional impression that you portray.
  3. For translators, translation PMs, and localisation engineers: With STE working for your team in the background, you can streamline your preparation of translation memory/terminology based on leaner documentation, lowered translation & localisation costs, and faster delivery.
  4. For LSPs and technical writing services companies: Diversify your business portfolio with an in-depth knowledge of STE as an international controlled English language standard.

Online Simplified Technical English Programme Highlights

  1. Highly efficient: We will cover all 382 pages of the ASD-STE100 Specification in two days for immediate implementation.
  2. Practicality: cross-industry cases sharing by trainers with excellent pragmatic approach.
  3. Follow-up period: 4-month post-training consultation starts immediately after the training to ensure a seamless transition to STE writing at work.
  4. Experienced trainer: Ms Shumin Chen, Co-founder & Head of ASD-STE100 training & implementation of Shufrans TechDocs.

Our Training Service Package guarantees the following:

  1. Reduces your content development time and efforts
  2. Significantly lowers post-processing (e.g. translation) cost
  3. One-stop content quality solution
  4. Overall quality improvement.

Instructor-led training (ILT) represents 66% of corporate training and development; it reaches 76% in high-performing companies and 80% in high-consequence industries: healthcare industry, pharmaceutical industry, finance, utilities, etc.

 

 

 

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English workshop for all industries, 7 – 8 June 2018 in Istanbul, Turkey

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English workshop for all industries, 7 – 8 June 2018 in Istanbul, Turkey

Quick facts

Dates: 7 – 8 June 2018

Location: Istanbul, Turkey

Length of training: 2 days

Sign up early to enjoy a 20% training discount

Summary

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English (STE) is a controlled language that is used to write technical manuals in such a way that they can be more easily understood by an international audience. STE helps to make translations cheaper and more accurate. Often a formal requirement for aircraft and defence maintenance documentation, STE can easily be adapted to all technical industries and beyond. Ms. Shumin Chen will teach participants how to correctly and effectively use STE in practice. She will also address some of the mistakes commonly found in technical writing and the frequently incorrect use of common STE writing rules.

It is important that operation and management information be understandable to the target audience. Sometimes, operation information is conveyed through a less-than-optimum selection of words. The manufacturer’s technical language can result in incomprehensible operation documentation.

Course outline*

  • Practical overview of ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English
  • How STE helps both native & non-native speakers of English
  • Writing rules and how to apply them in practice
  • How to use the general vocabulary
  • How to deal with industry-specific terminology
  • How to use STE for various documentation types
  • How to implement STE with minimal disruption to on-going production and existing documentation
  • Hands-on STE editing and review

* Shufrans also offers customised ASD-STE100 training solutions tailored to meet your specific requirements. These courses are normally provided at the customer’s premises.

Who should attend?

  • Compliance managers
  • CIO, COO, CTO
  • Customer support managers
  • Documentation managers
  • Editors
  • Engineering managers
  • Engineers and SMEs who create documentation
  • ILS managers
  • Maintenance managers
  • Operation managers
  • Product managers
  • Project managers
  • Quality managers
  • Technical writers
  • Translation managers
  • Translators

What training outcomes to expect?

Our interactive training, exercises and workshop, will teach participants to standardise content to:

  • Author more efficiently
  • Communicate more effectively with a global audience
  • Improve operational safety
  • Reduce AOG / downtime
  • Facilitate modular writing and reuse
  • Facilitate teamwork
  • Facilitate translation
  • Maximise consistency
  • Optimise product lifecycle support
  • Reduce the cost of creating and maintaining technical publications

Trainer’s qualifications

Ms. Shumin Chen, principal trainer & consultant at Shufrans TechDocs received her professional on-the-job training in the field of STE under the tutelage of Dr Frans Wijma, a linguist and documentation expert. Together as an experienced global team, they provided their combined knowledge and dedication to benefit customers worldwide. To date, they have provided training and consultancy services to over 170 companies. Shufrans TechDocs is the only company with such vast experience in providing certified STE training.

Shumin has supported various companies with their STE and other documentation needs, based on standards where possible. Although STE was developed for the aerospace industry, more specifically for aircraft maintenance documentation, Shumin found that it made a lot of sense to apply the same principles to other industries and types of documents as well. Few -if any- changes to the specification are necessary to adapt STE to industries ranging from machinery to IT, automotive to medical equipment.

 

 

Certified ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English training workshop in Tel Aviv, Israel

Certified ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English training workshop in Tel Aviv, Israel

Quick facts

When? Mid July 2018

Location: Tel Aviv, Israel

Length of training: 2 days

Early bird registration: Before 15 June 2018

Sign up early to enjoy a 20% training discount

Deadline for registration: 29 June 2018

Summary

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English (STE) is a controlled language that is used to write technical manuals in such a way that they can be more easily understood by an international audience. STE helps to make translations cheaper and more accurate. Often a formal requirement for aircraft and defence maintenance documentation, STE can easily be adapted to all technical industries and beyond. Ms. Shumin Chen will teach participants how to correctly and effectively use STE in practice. She will also address some of the mistakes commonly found in technical writing and the frequently incorrect use of common STE writing rules.

All our training materials are updated according to the ASD-STE100 Specification Issue 7, January 2017.

 

 

 

Course outline*

  • Practical overview of ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English
  • How STE helps both native & non-native speakers of English
  • Writing rules and how to apply them in practice
  • How to use the general vocabulary
  • How to deal with industry-specific terminology
  • How to use STE for various documentation types
  • How to implement STE with minimal disruption to on-going production and existing documentation
  • Hands-on STE editing and review

“The Simplified Technical English course content and requirements provided by Shumin Chen were an absolute good fit with the TCLoc Master’s program. A technical communicator has to know about the existing specifications for technical documentation. Furthermore, this course helps the students to acquire new skills in order to enhance the accuracy and clarity of contents.” TCLoc Master’s Student, University of Strasbourg.

 

Who should attend?

  • Compliance managers
  • CIO, COO, CTO
  • Customer support managers
  • Documentation managers
  • Editors
  • Engineering managers
  • Engineers and SMEs who create documentation
  • Graphics specialists
  • ILS managers
  • Maintenance managers
  • Operation managers
  • Product managers
  • Project managers
  • Quality managers
  • Software research engineers
  • Technical illustrators
  • Technical writers
  • Translation managers
  • Translators

What training outcomes to expect?

Our interactive training, exercises and workshop, will teach participants to standardise content to:

  • Author more efficiently
  • Communicate more effectively with a global audience
  • Improve operational safety
  • Reduce AOG / downtime
  • Facilitate modular writing and reuse
  • Facilitate teamwork
  • Facilitate translation
  • Maximise consistency
  • Optimise product lifecycle support
  • Reduce the cost of creating and maintaining technical publications

Trainer’s qualifications

Ms. Shumin Chen, principal trainer & consultant at Shufrans TechDocs received her professional on-the-job training in the field of STE under the tutelage of Dr Frans Wijma, a linguist and documentation expert. Together as an experienced global team, they provided their combined knowledge and dedication to benefit customers worldwide. To date, they have provided training and consultancy services to over 180 companies. Shufrans TechDocs is the only company with such vast experience in providing certified STE training.

Although STE was developed for the aerospace industry, more specifically for aircraft maintenance documentation, Shumin found that it made a lot of sense to apply the same principles to other industries and types of documents as well. Few -if any- changes to the specification are necessary to adapt STE to industries ranging from machinery to IT, automotive to medical equipment.

For technical enquiries, please reach out to experienced STE writer Rochelle Fisher at rochelle@asd-ste100.net

For sales enquiries, contact Shufrans TechDocs here.

* Shufrans also offers customised ASD-STE100 training solutions tailored to meet your specific requirements. These courses are normally provided at the customer’s premises.

 

Write effective user manuals & instructions with ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English

Write effective user manuals & instructions with ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English

Quick facts

Dates: 4 – 6 September 2018

Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia

Length of training: 3 days

Deadline for registration: 17 August 2018

Summary

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English (STE) is a controlled language that is used to write technical manuals in such a way that they can be more easily understood by an international audience. STE helps to make translations cheaper and more accurate. Often a formal requirement for aircraft and defence maintenance documentation, STE can easily be adapted to all technical industries and beyond. Ms. Shumin Chen will teach participants how to correctly and effectively use STE in practice. She will also address some of the mistakes commonly found in technical writing and the frequently incorrect use of common STE writing rules.

Course outline*

  • Day 1: Classroom Training
    1. Practical overview of ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English
    2. How STE helps both native & non-native speakers of English
    3. Benefits of adopting the STE international writing standard
    4. Writing rules and how to apply them in practice
    5. How to use the general vocabulary.
  • Day 2: Application, Review, & Exercises
    1. Approved and non-approved words discussion and the rationale behind.
    2. How to deal with industry-specific terminology
    3. How to use STE for various documentation types
    4. How to implement STE with minimal disruption to on-going production and existing documentation
  • Day 3: Extended Writing Workshop
    1. Practical workshop session for applying STE rules to your own documents
    2. Review, edit, and discuss participants’ own documents to reinforce learning
    3. Classroom presentation of own documents.

* Shufrans also offers customised ASD-STE100 training solutions tailored to meet your specific requirements. These courses are normally provided at the customer’s premises.

Learning how to optimally use a documentation standard like ASD-STE100 is a substantial boost to our technical writing team’s capabilities and significantly improved our compliance rating! Raja Sureshbabu, Global Head of Aerospace Vertical, Tata Consultancy Services.

Who should attend?

  • Compliance managers
  • CIO, COO, CTO
  • Customer support managers
  • Documentation managers
  • Editors
  • Engineering managers
  • Engineers and SMEs who create documentation
  • Graphics specialists
  • ILS managers
  • Maintenance managers
  • Operation managers
  • Product managers
  • Project managers
  • Quality managers
  • Software research engineers
  • Technical illustrators
  • Technical writers
  • Translation managers
  • Translators

What training outcomes to expect?

Our interactive training, exercises and workshop, will teach participants to standardise content to:

  • Author more efficiently
  • Communicate more effectively with a global audience
  • Improve operational safety
  • Reduce AOG / downtime
  • Facilitate modular writing and reuse
  • Facilitate teamwork
  • Facilitate translation
  • Maximise consistency
  • Optimise product lifecycle support
  • Reduce the cost of creating and maintaining technical publications

Trainer’s qualifications

Ms. Shumin Chen, principal trainer & consultant at Shufrans TechDocs received her professional on-the-job training in the field of STE under the tutelage of Dr Frans Wijma, a linguist and documentation expert. Together as an experienced global team, they provided their combined knowledge and dedication to benefit customers worldwide. To date, they have provided training and consultancy services to over 180 companies. Shufrans TechDocs is the only company with such vast experience in providing certified STE training.

Shumin has supported various companies with their STE and other documentation needs, based on standards where possible. Although STE was developed for the aerospace industry, more specifically for aircraft maintenance documentation, Shumin found that it made a lot of sense to apply the same principles to other industries and types of documents as well. Few -if any- changes to the specification are necessary to adapt STE to industries ranging from machinery to IT, automotive to medical equipment.

Tüm sektörler için Basitleştirilmiş Teknik İngilizce (ASD-STE100) Çalıştayı, 27-29 Eylül 2017, Ankara

Tüm sektörler için Basitleştirilmiş Teknik İngilizce (ASD-STE100) Çalıştayı, 27-29 Eylül 2017, Ankara

Çalıştay Bilgileri

Tarih: 27 – 29 Eylül 2017

Yer: Ankara

Süre: 2 (tam) gün

Son Erken Kayıt Tarihi: 5 Eylül 2017

Erken kayıtlarda %20 indirim uygulanmaktadır.

ASD-STE100 (Simplified Technical English, STE) Basitleştirilmiş Teknik İngilizce, uluslararası bir topluluk tarafından daha kolay anlaşılabilen bir teknik el kitabı hazırlamada kullanılan kontrollü bir dildir. STE, dil çevirilerinin daha ucuz ve eksiksiz olmasını sağlar. Havacılık ve savunma sanayilerinin idame dökümantasyonlarında resmi bir gereksinim olsa da, STE kolayca diğer teknik sektörlere de uyarlanabilir. Bayan Shumin Chen katılımcılara STE’nin pratikte nasıl doğru ve efektif bir şekilde kullanılması gerektiğini öğretecektir. Aynı zamanda teknik yazıda sıkça karşılaşılan hataların ve genelde yanlış kullanılan STE yazım kurallarının da üzerine eğilecektir.

Operasyonel ve yönetimsel bilgilerin hedef topluluk tarafından anlaşılabilir olması çok önemlidir. Operasyonel bilgiler bazen optimal olmayan kelime seçimleriyle iletiliyor olabilir. Üreticinin kullandığı teknik dil ise çok anlaşılamayan bir operasyonel dökümantasyona sebep olabilir.

Çalıştay Konuları

  • ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English: Uygulamalı bir Genel Bakış
  • STE nasıl hem anadili İngilizce olan hem de olmayan kişilere faydalar sağlar?
  • Yazım kuralları ve pratikte nasıl uygulanmaları gerektiği
  • Genel kelime hazinesi nasıl kullanılmalıdır?
  • Sektöre özgü terminoloji nasıl ele alınmalı/kullanılmalıdır?
  • STE, farklı dökümantasyon tipleri için nasıl kullanılır?
  • Devam eden geliştirme faaliyetlerini ve hali hazırdaki dökümantasyonu aksatmadan STE nasıl uygulamaya koyulmalıdır?
  • STE derleme ve gözden geçirmesinin uygulamalı eğitimi

 

TCTrainNet offers new e-learning training course module on Simplified Technical English

TCTrainNet offers new e-learning training course module on Simplified Technical English

Training & e-learning

TCTrainNet is the first company worldwide to launch a Simplified Technical English (STE) e-learning course by Shumin CHEN to train technical writers and subject matter experts in the use and effective implementation of Simplified Technical English (STE). STE is the international standard for writing clear and accurate content and STE training is now made available to technical writers, engineers, and documentation teams.

This article was first published on tcworld magazine for information management by Monika Engelke • April 2017

As a technical writer, your main task is to transfer technical information to users in a clear way to help prevent user errors. In global organizations, a large amount of user information is written in English, with STE (Simplified Technical English) playing an important role as an international standard. Professional technical writers have a lot to gain by using this standard to communicate and be understood accurately worldwide.

That is why TCTrainNet has added a new training unit on STE that has been developed by our experts! In this new unit, you will get an overview of more than 60 rules that will help improve your writing skills.

The STE learning unit serves as a basic introduction to the concept and working principles of STE.

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English (STE) is the international standard for accurate and efficient documentation. STE helps to make technical documentation easy to understand by standardizing vocabulary, grammar and style while letting users control their specific terminology.

It includes:

  • A set of technical English writing rules
  • A basic general vocabulary dictionary for writing technical documentation.

Language for all industries

STE addresses difficulties in understanding the English language. Problems related to complex sentence structures, confusing word forms, and unclear vocabulary are identified and resolved using STE technical writing rules. In George Orwell’s words, “If you simplify your English, you are freed from the worst follies of orthodoxy.”

The learning unit is intended to help you:

  1. Use words from the STE dictionary to replace ambiguous, confusing technical terms in your technical documentation.
  2. Apply STE writing rules in practice.
  3. Gain practical working knowledge of ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English.

Get certified in STE

Besides the STE e-learning module, Shufrans TechDocs’ online certified Simplified English workshops are live training sessions organised on a monthly basis for technical writers, information architects, and engineers based in Asia, the Middle East, Africa, Europe, the US, and Canada.

Participants can engage one another in constructive discussions that include suggestions on how to improve text readability and user-friendliness while being accurate and concise in your technical writing content at the same time. All exchanges are moderated by a well qualified Simplified Technical English trainer who will ensure quality and depth of discussion for every workshop participant.


Shumin Chen

About the trainer

Since 2006, Ms Shumin Chen has been working as a consultant with customers in various industries worldwide: aerospace and defence, banking, consumer products, healthcare, IT, medical and fitness equipment. She has helped many companies with their documentation needs, based on standards where possible, and is widely regarded as a leading expert in ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English training, aviation documentation, and multilingual documentation.

Ms Chen now heads the ASD-STE100 training arm of Shufrans TechDocs. In her current role, Ms Chen continues to focus on the practical implementation of international standards to facilitate the efficient creation and management of multilingual documentation.

Customise your Simplified Technical English Workshop with us today!

Customise your Simplified Technical English Workshop with us today!

Design your own Simplified Technical English writing and editing workshop in Holland

Amsterdam, 9 – 11 April 2018

Eindhoven, 4 – 6 June 2018

Utrecht, 10 – 12 December 2018

Length of training: 1, 2, or 3 days

Deadline: Registration ends two weeks before the commencement of every workshop

Cost per participant: From 395 EUR onwards

Summary

ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English (STE) is a controlled language that is used to write technical manuals in such a way that they can be more easily understood by an international audience. Language standardisation helps us to achieve a number of benefits. We become more consistent on a word level that starts with the simple fact that we are going to use the same word whenever we refer to the same thing, so that means an improved level of consistency. The same happens to sentence structures or phrases.

Followed this course last February and truly learned a lot. Shumin is very experienced and really knows what she is talking / teaching about. Recommended for all manual writers!

– Hans Harlé, Entecst Technical Communication

Course outline*

Participants have the flexibility of attending a 1, 2, or 3-day training session with us.

  • Day 1: Classroom Training
    1. Practical overview of ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English
    2. How STE helps both native & non-native speakers of English
    3. Benefits of adopting the STE international writing standard
    4. Writing rules and how to apply them in practice
    5. How to use the general vocabulary.
  • Day 2: Application, Review, & Exercises
    1. Approved and non-approved words discussion and the rationale behind.
    2. How to deal with industry-specific terminology
    3. How to use STE for various documentation types
    4. How to implement STE with minimal disruption to on-going production and existing documentation
  • Day 3: Extended Writing Workshop
    1. Practical workshop session for applying STE rules to your own documents
    2. Review, edit, and discuss participants’ own documents to reinforce learning
    3. Classroom presentation of own documents.

* Shufrans also offers customised technical English training solutions tailored to meet your specific requirements. These courses are normally provided at the customer’s premises or at our offices in Singapore.

Who should attend?

  • Compliance managers
  • Communication managers
  • Content specialists
  • Content strategists
  • Content quality analysts
  • CIO, COO, CTO
  • Customer support managers
  • Documentation specialists
  • Editors
  • Engineering managers
  • Engineers and SMEs who create documentation
  • Field support engineers
  • HSE managers
  • ILS managers
  • Information developers
  • International process managers
  • Operation managers
  • Product managers
  • Programme managers
  • Project managers
  • Quality assurance managers
  • Safety inspection engineers
  • Service & Maintenance managers
  • Supply Chain Managers
  • Technical administrators
  • Technical documentation consultants
  • Technical information managers
  • Technical linguists
  • Technical publications managers
  • Technology services advisors
  • Technical writers
  • Translation managers
  • Translators

What will I learn?

Ms. Shumin Chen will teach participants how to correctly and effectively use STE in practice. She will also address some of the mistakes commonly found in technical writing and the frequently incorrect use of common STE writing rules.

Our interactive training, exercises and workshop, will teach participants to standardise content to:

  • Author more efficiently
  • Communicate more effectively with a global audience
  • Improve operational safety and reliability
  • Reduce AOG / downtime
  • Facilitate machine and human translation
  • Facilitate modular writing and reuse
  • Facilitate teamwork
  • Maximise consistency
  • Optimise product lifecycle support
  • Reduce the cost of creating and maintaining technical publications

Trainer’s qualifications

Ms. Shumin Chen, principal trainer & consultant at Shufrans TechDocs received her professional on-the-job training in the field of STE under the tutelage of Dr Frans Wijma, a linguist and documentation expert. Together as an experienced global team, they provided their combined knowledge and dedication to benefit customers worldwide. To date, they have provided training and consultancy services to over 180 companies. Shufrans TechDocs is the only company with such vast experience in providing certified STE training.

Shumin has supported various companies with their STE and other documentation needs, based on standards where possible. Although STE was developed for the aerospace industry, more specifically for aircraft maintenance documentation, Shumin found that it made a lot of sense to apply the same principles to other industries and types of documents as well. Few -if any- changes to the specification are necessary to adapt STE to industries ranging from machinery to IT, automotive to medical equipment.

 

 

Dozuki Workshop Series – Optimize your technical content (Part 2 of 3)

Dozuki Workshop Series – Optimize your technical content (Part 2 of 3)

Read Part 1 of our blog series here:

Dozuki Workshop Series – Optimize your technical content (Part 1 of 3)

A precise, coherent and audience-oriented technical content delivery is what every professional technical communicator should aim for, and standardising your terminology and documents at the word, phrase, and sentence levels is the first step to take.

In part two of our three-part text analysis, we will continue to share more examples of how you can prepare your content for optimum re-use, readability, and translatability. We will highlight areas for improvement, then provide the same information based on Simplified Technical English (STE) writing rules.

 

RULE: 5.1 Keep procedural sentences as short as possible.

1a) Standard English:

The next two steps demonstrate using the iSclack, a great tool for safely opening the iPhone 5c that we recommend for anyone doing more than one repair on an iPhone 5, 5s, or 5c. If you aren’t using the iSclack, skip to Step 5.

1b) STE:

If you do not use the iSclack, go to Step 5. Steps 3 and 4 show you how to use the iSclack to open the iPhone 5c safely. If you will do more than one repair, we recommend this tool.

Analysis:

In this rewrite, we advise users to skip the next two steps immediately if they do not use the iSclack. Also, shorter instructions that inform the user what specific actions to complete are easier to process. Procedural sentences in STE should ideally stay within the 20-word limit.

 

RULE: 3.3  Use the approved forms of the verb to make only:

  – The infinitive (to open..)

  – The imperative (Open the..)

 – The past participle as an adjective (the opened valve)

  – The simple present tense (it opens)

  – The simple past tense (it opened)

  – The future tense (you will open..).

2a) Standard English:

  • Close the handle on the iSclack, opening the suction-cup jaws.

2b) STE:

  • Close the iSclack handles to open the suction-cup jaws.

Analysis:

The present participle or verbs ending in -ing are not used in STE unless they are part of a technical name. Some examples include: during, lighting, missing, routing, and servicing.

 

RULE: 1.1 Only use approved words in the dictionary

3a) Standard English:

  • Place the bottom of your iPhone in between the suction cups, against the plastic depth gauge.
  • The top suction cup should rest just above the home button.
  • Open the handles to close the jaws of the iSclack. Center the suction cups and press them firmly onto the top and bottom of the iPhone.

3b) STE:

  • Put the bottom of your iPhone between the suction cups, against the plastic depth gauge.
  • The top suction cup must be just above the home button.
  • Open the handles to close the jaws. Align the suction cups with the center, then push them tightly onto the top and bottom of the iPhone.

Analysis:

Use ‘put‘ instead of ‘place’, ‘must‘ instead of ‘should’, ‘push‘ instead of ‘press’, and ‘tightly‘ instead of ‘firmly’. ‘Center‘ is an approved STE word, but only as a technical noun. Ergo, it is necessary to rewrite this clause to: ‘Align the suction cups with the centre,..’.

The STE general vocabulary or dictionary offers technical writers approved synonyms for non-approved words. This is going to be very helpful for the writer who is transitioning from Standard English to Simplified Technical English.

Further reading: Dozuki Workshop Series – Optimize your technical content (Part 3 of 3)

 

Missed this session? The on-demand presentation is now available below.

 

 


Shumin Chen

About the speaker

Since 2006, Ms Shumin Chen has been working as a consultant with customers in various industries worldwide: aerospace and defence, banking, consumer products, healthcare, IT, medical and fitness equipment. She has helped many companies with their documentation needs, based on standards where possible, and is widely regarded as a leading expert in ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English training, aviation documentation and multilingual documentation.

Ms Chen now heads the ASD-STE100 training arm of Shufrans TechDocs. In her current role, Ms Chen continues to focus on the practical implementation of international standards to facilitate the efficient creation and management of multilingual documentation.

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Shufrans TechDocs and Literra expand Simplified Technical English writing workshop to Russia and the CIS region

Shufrans TechDocs and Literra expand Simplified Technical English writing workshop to Russia and the CIS region

Given a highly rated online Simplified Technical English (STE) writing workshop in May 2016, Shufrans TechDocs, the global leader in technical English writing consultancy, and Literra, a leading Russian language service provider will jointly offer their next technical English writing workshop sessions to customers from Russia and the CIS region.

Upcoming STE webinar sessions:

  1. September 8 – 9, 2016
  2. October 13 – 14, 2016
  3. November 29 – 30, 2016

These sessions will be conducted online in the form of highly interactive webinar sessions where course participants are offered the unique opportunity of analysing their documents according to tried-and-tested technical writing rules, and then apply what they have learnt in an online classroom environment. All sessions will be moderated by an experienced technical English trainer.

What delegates say about our technical English workshops

“I fully appreciate the advantages and benefits of implementing international language standards to our documentation. My favourite technical English writing rule is to only use company-approved terminology in addition to the general vocabulary that is offered by the Simplified Technical English specification.“

“The technical English writing rules were clearly presented during this webinar. Overall, I have found this webinar to be useful for my work and Shumin responded well to all my questions and clarified the doubts I had before taking this course.”

For more information about the online workshops please contact Mr Dmitriy Parfenov at d.parfenov@li-terra.ru